rn-53: improve easy bulk commit creation article

Author: chriscool

rev_news/drafts/edition-53.md

@@ -134,8 +134,10 @@ This edition covers what happened during the month of June 2019.
  Peff then sent [a version 2](https://public-inbox.org/git/[email protected]/)
  of the patch that implements `test_commit_bulk` with many of the
  improvements that had been discussed. Junio discussed the
- implementation a bit further, but seemed happy with the patch, which
- will hopefully be merged soon.
+ implementation a bit further, but seemed happy with the patch series.
+
+ Peff sent [a version 3](https://public-inbox.org/git/[email protected]/)
+ recenty which will hopefully be merged soon.
 
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