rn-93: fix archive submodules article

Author: chriscool

rev_news/drafts/edition-93.md

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the month of October 2022.
  the patch series had a TODO list with a number of items, most of
  which seemingly already addressed. As the stats in the cover letter
  showed 16 files changed, 269 insertions, 96 deletions, he said it
- was a bit much for a few patches, and suggested to split them.
+ was a bit much for a few patches, and suggested splitting them.
 
  Heather replied to René that the TODO list came from GitGitGadget.
  And René found that this tool was using an
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the month of October 2022.
 
  Unfortunately it looks like Heather has been swamped with her own
  work and didn't have time to send a new version yet. Hopefully
- though we will get this very request feature soon.
+ though we will get this very requested feature soon.
 
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