Rev News: reword confusing sentence

Signed-off-by: Johannes Schindelin <[email protected]>

Author: dscho

rev_news/drafts/edition-24.md

@@ -99,8 +99,8 @@ the [Git Merge 2017](http://git-merge.com/) conference that happenend on Februar
 
  * Some work on a daemon for file system notifications
  in the background (inotify) has been done by Duy
- Nguyen and David Turner, and was planned to rework,
- but the present contributor is at present busy with
+ Nguyen and David Turner, and a rework was planned,
+ but the present contributor is currently busy with
  other things.
 
  * On Windows, there is no inotify feature available